Rebz :)

Firstly, I loved it! It was one of those stories that just keep you reading and reading... Anyway, the only part that wasn't 100% was the flashbacks. I do know ...

Ok, firstly I liked it, but it is nowhere near flawless. I know a good romance when I see one, and this could really go places. The whole first part ...

This was pretty good. I loved the describing of James (sounds like a real dream-boat)I love what you said about his eyes. "I love you" This made absoulutly no sense. ...

I don't understand this very well - I can't pick up the romance and no offence, it sounds like a weird version of a childs bedtime story. It was moving ...

I liked it. The twist at the end was good, and the ryhming was okay. It was pretty good, seeing as you just randomly put it together, but the title ...

OK, here is my actual reveiw (Much better than the last one). Firstly, I was great, it has potential, like something in a book or movie, a lot can be ...

that was very good! i liked the part where the spoon got used, you described it very well. you made spoons come alive, which couldn't have been as easy as ...

that was really good. but i have to ask, when she speaks human like a small child would, is that because she stopped speaking human at a young age? and ...